關于長城的英語作文范文
導語：長城又稱萬里長城，是中國古代的軍事防御工程。長城修筑的歷史可上溯到西周時期，發生在首都鎬京(今陜西西安)的著名的典故“烽火戲諸侯”就源于此，你一定會有許多不一樣的想法吧，把它記錄下，來編寫成英語范文吧!歡迎閱讀，僅供參考，更多相關的知識，請關注CNFLA學習網的欄目!，
關于長城的英語作文：
This morning, our family in the hotel to get up early, because want to climb the Great Wall. In the intersection, we had 811 tour car, full spirit to set off the Great Wall! On the road, I saw the majestic buildings, and small buildings. Waked up like the high buildings, short building is still in bed. Watch I unconsciously fell asleep. Finally to the badaling Great Wall, we got off the car, saw on the Great Wall already has a lot of people, I thought: "what do these people are faster than us?" So say, I don't do the snail. So I soon began to climb! 2, sister first began to climb, I was not tired, but he climbed half is tired. Almost at the end. We will go on. In the process of climbing the Great Wall, I know of chairman MAO's famous words doesn't reach the Great Wall is not a good sweat. Mean; If you don't climb the Great Wall is not a good sweat. You have to climb the Great Wall. It's so happy today!
Teacher comment on: I envy the little author to climb the Great Wall at badaling oh, the level of the article is clear, small author point directly at the beginning, confessed his trip to the readers, the small of the author's writing center on top of the climb the Great Wall at badaling, little of the author's psychological activity and language here is very humor, is also in line with their own image. Finally the end of the small author direct lyrical. This article also has a shortage of place, however, the imperfection of the primary and secondary content arrangement, to climb the Great Wall at badaling process description is too simple, hope that the little author in writing should pay attention to this problem, come on.
參考翻譯：
今天早上，我們一家人在賓館早早地起床了，因為要去爬長城。到了路口，我們上了811旅游團的`車，就精神滿滿地向長城出發啦! 在路上，我看見了雄偉壯觀的高樓，和矮小的樓房。好像高樓房睡醒了，矮樓房還在睡覺。看著看著我就不知不覺地睡著了。 終于到八達嶺長城了，我們下了車，看見在長城上已經有好多人了，我想：“這些人怎么比我們來的都還快?”于是說：我可不做蝸牛。所以我很快的就開始爬啦! 妹妹第一個開始爬，我第2，開始的時候還不累，不過，爬了一半就累了。快要到終點時。我們就下去了。 在爬長城的過程中，我知道了毛主席說的一句話不到長城非好汗。意思是;如果不爬長城就不是好汗。你們一定要爬長城。 今天真快樂!
名師點評：真羨慕小作者去爬八達嶺長城哦，這篇文章的層次清晰，一開始小作者直接點題，向讀者交代了自己的行程，接下來小作者的寫作重心放在了爬八達嶺長城上面去了，這里小作者的心理活動和語言很幽默，也很符合自己的形象。最后的結尾小作者直接抒情。不過這篇文章也有不足的地方，主次內容的安排不夠完善，對于爬八達嶺長城的過程的描寫過于簡單，希望小作者在以后的寫作中要注意這一問題，加油。
【長城的英語作文】相關文章：
關于長城的英語作文02-22
美麗的長城經典英語作文01-18
正在消失的長城英語作文04-01
難忘的長城英語作文范文01-18
長城旅游英語參考09-06
2016長城的英語作文優秀范文01-18
最美的長城游記英語作文01-18
2016關于長城的英語作文模板09-18
2016描寫長城的英語作文范本09-18